Yearning (rictameter)
Yearning,longing for you,tears me apart inside;melts me like a candle on fireand seeps to the very depth of my heartwhere it lingers like morning sunfor with you gone I amleft with nought...
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Very nice and well done `';.;'`Jessica`';.;'` Isn't it strange that a gift could be an enemy, Isn't it weird that a privilege could feel like a chore,Maybe its me, but this life isn't going anywhere,...
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Oh...*sigh* what more can I say. You make the reader yearn too.
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Jessica, Suzanne, thanks. I enjoyed writing this one.JanPlease join me at The Poetry Factory or view my personal webpage at Poems For The Heart and Soul
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jan ... what a wonderful rictameter! you have captured yearning just perfectly in this!
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Superb...excellent use of the form to express the feelings...and expressed so well... Every new beginning comes from some other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The Maelstrom
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Beth, soulsease, thanks. I enjoy this style better than haiku or cinquin. It gives me just that few more words to play with while still being "less is more".JanPlease join me at The Poetry Factory or...
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Very nice, yet kinda painful, too. You've done well here capturing the meaning of the word... 'You'll NEVER know if you don't TRY...-S. Skrib'All we have to decide... is what to do with the time that...
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This piece speaks to a place I'd forgotten about. It is beautiful and a touch melancholy. Like it much.Serenity...Brandi"Your friend is your needs answered"- Kahlil Gibran
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